hmm, you got the depth of field view of this pose quite well..ive seen many including me getting it very wrong. so i know how hard it is to get ir right, so props to you for that ^^
this is pretty well drawn, i cant really find anything wrong here...well beside the breast. from this point of view it looks kinda odd, like if her breasts have to be gigantic to be visible from here...but i guess thats just a minor complain, good job on this ^^