bocodamondo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[FRANKY]

haha nice i like your cartoon style here ^^
and i love franky...however i think franky looked better back then before the 2 years timeskip. now he looks too muscular and he dont allways have his awesome haircut style

Nicol3 responds:

Hey, thanks. That's what people have been saying.. I did this "classic" one because a requester asked for it because the "Timeskip version sucks". Did my research. Took a while, though!

[Yoko Littner]

actually...this is not bad
theres many anatomy parts wich are off on this but theres also alot of good ones as well. like the hips they are right sized and placed. the cleveage also looks acceptable. the place wich looks bad is the shoulders .yokos scarf dont hide her entire neck , there still some showable. her shoulders and arms are too big and thick wich looks more manly then feminine . and the eyes i think its a good idea to make more eyelashes in her eyes and bigger eye limbus . i dont know if i should give you some tips about eyes because its more like a 'style" matter , there is no one specific style. BUT! if you want to make it look more anime like then a bigger eye limbus has to be done, unless you made a "suprised expression" .the right hand is pretty good. but the left hand isnt but what do i know (i suck at drawing hands myself) but the thumb is missing though. i can see that the hair was the last thing you made and oh boy you really went lazy on that ^^! but then again (even i made yokos hair too long to first times) but her hair isnt that big.
but yeah i can see alot of potential here. practice makes the master
oh and i recommend you to make the shading colors stronger to make it more visible
tululu

DotExecutables responds:

I can explain a few things.

1. The thumb on her left hand is tucked underneath the palm. (However that's probably my fault for not making it look that way)

2. She does have a surprised expression.

3. I'm not really going for an Anime style.

Thanks so much for the critique!

[Icarus]

i bet he never asked for this

[Happy]

lol , thats something different from you ^^

ehm..... <:3

[Kaylee]

DAT EYELASHES...DEM DETAILS ON THE CLOTHES....bocodamondo faints

[I can't name shet]

not really. i prefer spring over summer because the weather is PERFECT . not too hot nor too cold....oh and yeah. nice artwork ^^ i like the anatomy details & prespective view

[BinaryDood's Girl]

wow. i can see this took you some time to make.

[Bad endings]

wait. bioshock infinite had a shitty ending?

Rennis5 responds:

depends on your point of veiw

[Just need one!]

sonic has 0 rings? well this is obviously no sonic unleashed "OHO0 BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURN!!

[A temper like a crashing wave]

i wish i could do epic dynamic poses like this D:

kmau responds:

The art of overstretching muscles and breaking bones.