well....i dont think its a good idea to keep saying this "fave me if you like my style"...i mean if someone will like your style he will fave you anyway, but if you pretty much tell them to do so....that might get in your way, since alot of people think with "dont tell me what to do" or doing the opposite of someone tell them to do... but yeah anyway
the art style itself is....well...lets just say not my cup of tea. well except for the background, i do like that
heres some tips if you would like to keep them in mind:
the mouth should be under the nose and a bit more pushed to the right side, not the left..umm heres what i mean: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/draw/2d229747315dce3f6a0d9fd1e392d7a9
the hair needs to be a bit more fluffy with longer hair strings coming out. not all tiny spikes like hedgehog
the neck area also should be a bit more bigger and detailed....heres what i mean: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/draw/e15f3ef93c41f9d146190e441780bfba
the pumpkin in her arm looks like its flying and not under the dark one below..
so yeah i hope this might help you a bit....just make sure to stop with the "hit the fav button if you like my style" it just pisses alot of people off.