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well....i dont think its a good idea to keep saying this "fave me if you like my style"...i mean if someone will like your style he will fave you anyway, but if you pretty much tell them to do so....that might get in your way, since alot of people think with "dont tell me what to do" or doing the opposite of someone tell them to do... but yeah anyway
the art style itself is....well...lets just say not my cup of tea. well except for the background, i do like that
heres some tips if you would like to keep them in mind:
the mouth should be under the nose and a bit more pushed to the right side, not the left..umm heres what i mean: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/draw/2d229747315dce3f6a0d9fd1e392d7a9
the hair needs to be a bit more fluffy with longer hair strings coming out. not all tiny spikes like hedgehog
the neck area also should be a bit more bigger and detailed....heres what i mean: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/draw/e15f3ef93c41f9d146190e441780bfba
the pumpkin in her arm looks like its flying and not under the dark one below..
so yeah i hope this might help you a bit....just make sure to stop with the "hit the fav button if you like my style" it just pisses alot of people off.

7darkriders responds:

i knew something was wrong at the point i was about to give my signature but yes thank you for pointing it out and review il keep this in mind next time I draw were all still learning.

and for the little advertisement is just a little advertisement sometimes people just look and run off just like that no votes no reviews nothing and sometimes people forget you know. but again il take your advice and tips by heart

-Alex Trinidad

not trying to be a dick but...i would enjoy this drawing more if it wasnt for the fact that it heavily reminds me of this https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/sample/3f/f3/sample-3ff349d946a7ba9be4aaac774674bbac.jpg?3618481

MAKOMEGA responds:

Thats happen when someone give you a photo for reference and sayit "i want a draw commission like this but with this and this" lol
The money talk D:

so he'd rather watch the pain and misery of others than having sex? sounds like a god alright ^^
stupid joke aside. i really like this . the colors are quite lively and the expressions are very well done, even for the faceless guard haha ^^

haha i love the face expression and the quite dynamic pose ^^
i love it

-sidenote, for some reason your persona outfit reminds me of zoey from l4d

damn! this looks pretty awesome! especially the hair. nice job ^^

oh my, you actually did it ^^
i KNEW she would look adorable with your art style, good job ^^

wow, your work never fails to amaze the hell out of me!

.....i feel like i have a very strong Deja vuu ...

G3no responds:

thanks a bunch man,
if by deja vu you mean you suspect they are the 2 characters i draw, yeah they are

muscles? i dont see any muscles haha
but no seriously, i can tell that you tried to draw a muscled girl but you were too afraid to to take a huge risk and end up playing it safe to not making her "not pretty".
don't be too afraid about shit like that, just let it all out and make the muscles look alot more detailed ^^
but beside that i think this looks alright. i don't like the nose but thats personal preference
i still think you should have shaded the hair, it looks quite bland like this
also i think the lower part of the body is a bit too small and too close to the upper. i think you should pushed it a little bit more down..... sorry if this is hard to understand , im not good with using fancy words for criticizing ^^

HadenDA responds:

Thank you for the review. I knew someone was going to say something about the lack of shading in her hair, it was intentional.

nice!, you are improving quite alot in such a short time ^^ keep it up

Rennis5 responds:

Thank you :D

looking at this actually gives me a nice summer beach feeling ^^ nice job

Parimak responds:

I'm glad! Thank you sir ;)

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